Sunday, December 20, 2009

John Whitcomb

This is what watching a special on Rudolf Valentino and thinking of John Whitcomb gets me.
I didn't know which I liked better of the 2, so I'm posting both and you can tell me what you think.

According to a number of professors, my work never looks fully completed so if you have an tips as to how to accomplish this, please insert input here.

As always, critiques encouraged.

1 comment:

miss liss said...

I like the second one better.. I think the smoke in the first one is nice, but needs to be dulled down if you want to really keep it. It distracts too much from the guys face.

Maybe they say it looks unfinished because the images don't look tight enough? Maybe if you tried tightening up the color and linework a bit?